Small things that are easy to miss/overlook. For now, the few things I noticed while not looking for them were just a few passive/aggressive word mix-ups, and a couple of past/present-tense mix-ups, with one word being present, the other going past. I'm keeping those in mind for when I go through again my first runs are just for fun at this point, playing with each suit. We're not going back to Atlus's stuttering, though. (The style of the mistakes could be up for discussions if someone feels the need.
Quote from: BlackDog61 on November 04, 2015, 03:47:49 PMĭon't forget Lamia has her own speech impediment, of course, which is made of (author-intentional) mistakes.
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